So I'm working on something for a proposal and was hoping to get some feedback from everyone. I originally did the drawing in color but my agent thinks just pen (like Shel Silverstein) might be better. The question is which rough sketch do you like better? A - just the outlines; or B - with a little bit of shading?
A
Or B?
And here's the color version in case you were wondering.
Any feedback would be greatly appreciated!
I know I like A or the color version best :) Agent/Proposal - stilettos (and the SousPug has paws) crossed that all goes well!!
ReplyDeleteI like A the best :) <3
ReplyDeleteI love the color, but I'll bow to your agent's superior knowledge. That said, I choose A.
ReplyDeleteI like B, with shading.
ReplyDeleteI like A or C
ReplyDeleteI like the choice of black & white, because there is more of a focus on the pug--it looks less...glossy and "perfect" in b&w which is charming. The hatch-mark shading, seems to compete with the pug face for some reason. Your contours and composition are always engaging and lovely, so I don't think the need is there for the additional shading on the clothing. BTW, I saw your store, I can't wait to get a mug! Best!
ReplyDeleteI like A - looks like a Shel Silverstein drawing:)
ReplyDeleteI like A.
ReplyDeleteYour artwork has a simplicity that is very appealing.
Of course the odd coloured one is a real treat as well.
Shay
I'd chime in for A as well, because it was the one that caused me to look at the dog and the girl's faces the most. The others were more "distracting."
ReplyDeleteA, because the pug 'pops' more, as people have already mentioned. But I love all your work!
ReplyDeleteWell, in my order, i Like: color, then A no shading, then B shading.
ReplyDeleteout of the two non-colored ones - I like A the best :)
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I like A better, unless they're supposed to be in the dark. The shading makes it look like they're in a dark room or something. :)
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ReplyDeleteA or C - good luck!
ReplyDeleteA looks great!
ReplyDeleteDefinite A.
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ReplyDeleteI like A for b&w, but I like the color best of all. Have you considered illustrating a kid's book? I would LOVE to see that! Thanks for sharing your art and puggies with us!
ReplyDeleteA!
ReplyDeleteA : D I really like the black and white because it reflects pug coloring contrast really well ; )
ReplyDeleteI love them as black and whites....simple and to the point. I can see my two pugs in yours. hehe
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